
【参考范文】
The short paragraph above tells us a real story about the history of the well-know writing French Revolution History. Claire, the author of French Revolution History, lost his script in the course of the writing, which could have broken him down. However, the great historian was not beat by the frustration. He restarted his writing and finished it with unyielding will.
The course of creation of the writing shows us that unyielding will is the key to success. Reviewing the whole story, what helped the author get to the success was just his perseverance. He did not give up his goal even when suffered from a great strike, which made me remember what happened on me.
Once I wanted to join in the football team in our school, but was refused by them because of my poor performance. Then I never give up my dream and kept practicing my skills although it was a tough period. At last I made it and got the permission to the team.
Actually the two stories have the same meaning that unyielding will is the most important element on the way to success.
【写作点金】
此属于材料型作文。此类作文在结构上分为以下几部分:
1、概括材料中陈述的主要内容
2、材料中所暗含的寓意是什么
3、结合自身的情况,进一步论证材料的寓意
4、总结
【高频词汇】
The short paragraph above tells us a real story about ...:上面的短文告诉我们这样一个真实的故事……
unyielding will is the key to success:不屈不挠的意志是成功的关键
perseverance:毅力
give up:放弃
suffer from:遭受
